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life stopped in the instant of collision

i woke from concussion strange to myself
a stranger in my own skin

i became unknown to the woman who gave me life

shattering impact in the October sunset

i was left naked
unclothed of self
minus all comforting fictions
my ass soaked from sitting in the right of way
my mouth cursing far away in a dreaming slur
coming back from the tunnel into the sweet light

hours had passed outside my knowledge
the ambulances
the crushed cars

my head reeling and reeling
as if i were lost forever
spiraling out into the void
©2005-2009 *hell-on-a-stick
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:iconanextraordinarygirl:
that's beautiful, man. a horrifying story, and such a dramatic way to become who you are now. it sucks that you had no choice in it. i hope you didn't have any physical pain to deal with, too, but i imagine you must have...........

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"I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong
:iconkill-cwj:
whoa crazy, we all have our bad accidents huh ? When I was 5 i put my leg through a glass and got 32 sitches :P .
:iconhell-on-a-stick:
nah, not alot. some stitches some bruises, but i couldnt even tell i was injured at the time.

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Behold! I am that which must always overcome itself. - Friedrich Nietzche
Now you can buy my book here!--------->>> [link]
:iconhell-on-a-stick:
wow. if you analyze that sentence its almost a haiku. seriously.

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Behold! I am that which must always overcome itself. - Friedrich Nietzche
Now you can buy my book here!--------->>> [link]
:iconkill-cwj:
:D I had to write those in english class last year, im not a great writer though :P but i did pass the haikus.
:iconhell-on-a-stick:
theyre great spontanious art. you ought to read The Dharma Bums by Jack Kerouac.
great stuff. :yum:

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Behold! I am that which must always overcome itself. - Friedrich Nietzche
Now you can buy my book here!--------->>> [link]
:iconfaeriecrone:
another good bit of work ... re-explored.

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Artists are magical helpers. Evoking symbols and motifs that connect us to our deeper selves, they can help us along the heroic journey of our own lives.
Joseph Campbell
:iconhell-on-a-stick:
i really just tried to open it up to be readable...i should write a few more about that day.

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Behold! I am that which must always overcome itself. - Friedrich Nietzche
Now you can buy my book here!--------->>> [link]
:iconfaeriecrone:
I thought it was a thorough tretament but I wasn't there.

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Artists are magical helpers. Evoking symbols and motifs that connect us to our deeper selves, they can help us along the heroic journey of our own lives.
Joseph Campbell

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